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Post by insomniacdude on May 27, 2003 1:51:07 GMT -5
I’m following the latest craze of writing personal stories, and I call this…”The Story”
“Guys, come here…” Anti yelled. He yelled to everybody who was with him: Rick, Static, Soapy, and NOS. “What is it?” NOS asked. Anti stopped and bent down to get a closer look. He overshadowed whatever it was. “Oh my god…you guys…this isn’t good…”Anti trailed off. “What is it?” Static bent down beside him and put her arm around him. “Oh…god…” “Dude, what the hell is it?” Soapy asked him. “It’s…it’s…it’s a…” Anti stuttered, standing up. “…A picture of your mom.” He cried. “Hahahaha, very funny. Don’t make me kick your ass. I’ll do it too. You know it.” Soapy flashed a bit of his Ice. “Yeah yeah we know you can kick our ass, thanks. Just once I’d like to go camping without having an ass-whooping.” Anti remarked. “Well maybe if you weren’t such a smart-ass in the first place…” Rick said. The group went silent and continued on. They were going hiking deep in the woods of POS, near Sector 7. They were planning to meet Sommie, UWA and STAREYe on the way, but so far no show. “Good god, are we there yet?” Everyone said in unison, stopping. “I thought you knew where we were going.” Everyone pointed to someone else and spoke in unison. “Poo stain!” NOS exclaimed. “So, we’re lost? In the POS? How?!” Static asked. “Do you really think we get lost in the place that I built?” Soapy asked her. “Do you think I’m that ignorant? I…” he reached into his pack. “I have a roadmap.” “Gee. A roadmap. That helps a lot. That could really come in handy…if we had any roads!” Anti said to him. “Yeah, but…oh…”Soapy trailed off. “So, now what? Did anyone leave a trail of bread crumbs?” “Oh, yah, but I ended it right near Cinderella’s castle off of the yellow brick road. Bread crumbs…honestly…” Anti replied. “We could wait…” NOS started to say, but was interrupted. “For me to come save your asses,” STAREYe said, falling from a tree above. “STAREYe! Where’s UWA and Sommie?” Rick asked him. “Walrus Assualt is looking through his hentai scrapbook. Sommie’s…sleeping...” STAREYe shrugs. “But anyway, you guys are near the campsite. Come on.” He takes off through the trees. Everyone follows suit. “Hey, guys, I found them.” He walks around, but they are nowhere to be seen. “Guys?” In the distance, they heard three people scream, followed by a large explosion, than silence. “UWA…? Sommie…?” The gang ran up the path to find what happened.
Well, that’s my first chapter. I don’t know if it’s good or not. I donno. But Anyway, I think everyone will be included. If you haven’t yet, and think you are 1337 enough to be in it, than speak up. Just gimme your element. I’ll use that in the fights (yes there will be fights) I outlined this whole thing in like, two seconds, so writers block wont come and I’ll be able to update pretty regularily.
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Post by Soapy on May 27, 2003 17:53:40 GMT -5
"a picture of your mom" Priceless. EDIT: No happy smilies.
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Post by insomniacdude on May 28, 2003 17:32:30 GMT -5
"It was over here..." NOS stammered. He rushed across the forest floor and found an entrance to a cave...blocked off by a large boulder. "Great. How are we going to get through there? It's not like any of us just carry around explosives for the hell of it." Static said, upset. "Uh...I do..." NOS said, reaching into his bag. He set up some explosives and lit them, then ducked away. The others followed suit. After several seconds, they stood back up, and went back. They had not exploded, but went out. "What? The spark just...stopped?" Soapy questioned. "Why?" "Because, you are not allowed to enter this place..." Anti said out of nowhere. "Anti, what are you..." But Anti was unable to respond. His eyes were rolled back, totally white, and his body was limp. "There is a person in this group who, if entered, shall upset the balance between good and evil. The cave is said to be the home of a monster, who kills anyone who enters it. The rock shall now be moved, for your friends may survive yet, but be warned. The chances of survival are slim, and if the chosen one entered, one would ruin the world's foundations and chaos would ensue." Anti said, as if in a trance. A few seconds after the last words were muttered, he looked up and shook his head. He looked around the area, but found nothing that could answer his confusion. "What in the name of UWA's hentai was that? I was thinking about eating a loaf of pancakes than suddenly, THAT?" Everyone looked at eachother puzzlingly. "Think they're going to make it out?" STAREYe asked. He crept nearer to the entrance. "STAREYe..." Soapy said, grabbing his arm. "I'm not one to believe in phony crap, you know that. I believe this is genuine." STAREYe swung his arm off. "Our friends need our help. If you can't realize that, than by all means, run away like little pansies. I'm going in. Who's coming with me?" Rick stepped forward, as did Static. Soapy and Anti stepped back. "Listen..." Anti started. "This is genuine. Nothing I know of could penetrate through my self defenses and set me under a trance. Whatever is going on is powerful. I wouldn't mess with them." He and Soapy headed a bit more back and found a log to sit on. "Than it's just us..." NOS said, proceeding further into the cave. Static and STAREYe followed suit. Several feet in, the entrance collapsed on itself, trapping them inside.
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Post by Soapy on May 28, 2003 17:57:21 GMT -5
ohnos! Nice. Does this mean Anti and I get to be the heroes? ;D
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Post by insomniacdude on May 28, 2003 22:08:22 GMT -5
Yes and no. You'll find out.
I feel like in a writing mood, so I'll add another part (if I can draw my attention away fomr #melee enough)
“NOS, STAREYe, Rick? Static…? Can you hear me?” Soapy had run up to the cave, and put his ear to the rock. “Uh, Soapy…There’s a huge gap up there that can be heard through perfectly. Besides, you think a boulder can stop Static’s electricity?” Anti reminded him. “Oh…yeah…” Soapy said before being cut off by a muffled Static. “I’m OK. NOS is unconscious. Rick's lying right next to him. STAREYe…he’s gone somewhere. I don’t see him anywhere.” Static yelled out. “Ok. As long as you’re OK.” Anti walked away and sat back down. Soapy followed him. “Oh, yeah, thanks.” Static yelled back out. She walked over to NOS. There was a gash on his head. “Come on, wake up. This place gives me the creeps.” She started slapping his face when she felt something on her shoulder. She stopped, and suddenly turned around, her electricity at ready. “Whoa…whoa…calmdown.” “Sommie! What happened?” Static questioned. “I’m not sure. I was sleeping, and I woke up here. I can’t seem to find UWA.” insomniacdude said. “What the hell is up with this place? Anti’s defences are broken…STAREYe and UWA are missing…You wake up here without coming here to begin with. Three screams emit with an explosion…This place gives me the creeps.” Static thought out loud. “Yah, I know. I mean, it’s not like I was even tired or anything. I was thinking about my Samus…” Sommie stopped and sighed. “…Ah…Samus…and suddenly I fell asleep, out of nowhere. Something fishie is going on, and I don’t like it one bit.” Sommie said. He was about to say something again, but stopped. “Wh…”Static started. “Sh…” Sommie turned around and crept forward. He sidled up against the wall, and peered around the corner. “Static...We’ve taken on more than we can handle. Run.” He yelled, before being flung back my a monstrous force. Static took one horrified look and turn around to run. She reached ten steps before she heard hyserical laughing. "Static, you need to chill out. It was me!" UWA popped out from the corner. Sommie picked himself up and came over to join them. "Watch yourself, UWA. That was more powerful than we agreed." He stared at him. "So?" Sommie started to talk, but stopped. "Good point. I guess my only life is to be a punching..." "BOO!" "...bag. Just go ahead, hit me, kick me, torment me all you wan...AH!" He turned around. NOS was there. "Surprise?" "Yeah, sure. Can we leave yet? I seriously hate this place." Static complained. "No, Rick's still lying on the floor, and STAREYe is nowhere to be found. Where'd he go?” NOS reminded her. “STAREYe is with you?” UWA asked them. “Well, not WITH us, but he’s hanging around somewhere.” Static told him. “He’s hanging around all right…” Sommie pointed up to the ceiling. STAREYe was hovering many feet above the ground, his arms spread wide. “STAREYe?” They all yelled up to him. He didn’t respond. After several seconds, he started spinning, and a large burst of light emitted from him. “STAREYe!” Static gasped.
Yeah. That took me like five hours, mainly because of drifiting in and out of South Park, music, and #melee. Turns out Static may be pegged as the main hero in this one. Don't worry, she isn't alone. It's not solely up to her to save the World. She'll have help. But by whom I stay silent. It may ruin some of the secrets and surprises.
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Post by Soapy on May 29, 2003 20:28:07 GMT -5
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Post by William on May 29, 2003 20:30:30 GMT -5
exelent, keep up the good work
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Post by KingRick on May 29, 2003 22:16:58 GMT -5
nice!
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Post by insomniacdude on May 30, 2003 1:23:01 GMT -5
No story tonight, due to ultra Matrix pwnage.
Dont worry, I'lll try and make it up to you tomorrow night.
EDIT: Cuz, You know, you just couldnt live with this story.
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Post by insomniacdude on May 31, 2003 15:39:43 GMT -5
STAREYe slowed to a halt, light still brightly outlining him. He slowly drifted back to the ground. As his feet hit the ground, he opened his eyes. “WHAT IN THE NAME OF SWEET BUNNIES OF AUBU DAUBI WAS THAT!!!” He screamed. Everyone shrugged. Rick revived. STAREYe’s big mouth had woken him up. “Huh…what happened?” Static walked over to him, and helped him up. “The entrance collapsed on itself.” “So, does that mean we’re stuck?” STAREYe asked. Static shrugged. “Soapy and Anti are still on the other side, so I guess they could help clear the rock from that side while we do it over here.” Static trotted back to the entrance. It was empty. “Um…can we leave now?” Sommie said, shaking. “Leaving sounds good…” NOS replied. They all looked at each other and ran out. Anti and Soapy were still sitting on the log, making out. Soapy looked over Anti’s shoulder and saw the group standing there, staring. Sommie took a camera out of his pocket and took a picture. “This one’s going in the scrapbook…” He muttered to himself. “So…” Soapy said, standing up. “I see everyone made it out alive?” “No, we all died, but we just wanted to come back and make you think we’re alive. Yes we’re all still alive…” Sommie ranted. “That place gave me the creeps” Rick said. UWA and NOS nodded their heads in agreement. “I mean, there wasn’t even any hentai in there. What kind of horrible place was that?” UWA raved, ripping out some hair. “It was horrible…the worst place on Earth.” Static started thinking. “That place was very…creepy. We should have never gone in there.” “I told you…” Anti went limp, and started to talk. “Oh, great, this again? What the Hell is going on?” NOS yelled. “Be quiet. I told you, do not enter. And now you may have disrupted the entire foundation of the World. You may have killed us all! I pity you puny mortals…” “How’s about you show yourself and say that to our faces!” Rick screamed to nobody. “Don’t mind if I do…” Anti regained consciousness. “Why me…? What the Hell did I do?” He looked around. Everyone was staring behind him. He turned around, slowly, and gulped. “Um…hi there. What’s your name? My name’s Anti….do you want to be my friend?” He asked, holding out his hand. “There was a monstrous creature standing there, nothing like anyone had ever seen before. I stood fifteen feet off the ground, with black, tough, leather-like skin. It stood on four legs, and had three arms sticking from his body: one from his chest, and two extending from the tips of his wings. There were seven fingers on each: five normal, and what seemed to be two opposable thumbs. Claws extend from them, and from his four toes also. Spikes protruded from many different places from his body. His wings were bright yellow, almost white, and his head was beak-like in structure, with sharp teeth extending out. His eye’s were thin and narrow, and illuminated in a deep red hue. There was a large piece of metal on his chest, with an awkward symbol on it that looked similar to the symbol of Bio-hazard. The monstrous creature snapped at Anti’s extended hand. “You have changed the World forever. I was sent here to stop you. Please step aside while I fulfill my mission, and I will leave all of you alone.” Nobody moved. “What are you going to do?” Static shouted to him. “In order for the World to live…one of you must die.”
I felt like I should leave this in a cliffhanger. I saw the Matrix, and I know how much cliffhangers piss you off. I like pissing people off. And you know what? EVERY chapter will be a cliffhanger.
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Post by staringvacantly on May 31, 2003 18:09:45 GMT -5
/me SV likes cliffhangers
MORE, MORE....cliffhangers! But really, I can't wait too see what happens next. Of course that's gonna happen at the end of every chapter.....
It's great so far. ;D
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Post by Static2007 on May 31, 2003 18:32:09 GMT -5
I just noticed you had a story! ROFL! Hilarious and awsome! Keep it up! ^_^
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 2, 2003 0:47:28 GMT -5
New chapter....
“Ok…We are SO totally not in Kansas anymore…” Sommie muttered. “Die?” NOS stammered. “Yes, die. Come now…the lives of one versus the lives of all. We both know everyone here is too righteous and selfless to let the World be destroyed.” Everyone looked around at eachother, confused, for several seconds. Then the fell on the ground, laughing hysterically. “Righteous?” STAREYe stuttered between laughs. “We’re the most selfish people in all of the internet.” Soapy managed during breaths. The monster held his head high, looking down upon everyone in arrogance. “How entertaining it must be to be so futile; so insignificant. So…stupid. Such puny little mortals.…” He muttered. Everyone stopped laughing immeadiately. Sommie rolled on his back and flipped himself up. “Too far, man…Too far. I’m out…” he said. He hung his head on his hands and walked back to the camping site. “What’s up with him?” UWA sniggered. “Beat’s me.” Static shrugged. “Don’t worry. He’s a pansy. He does this all the time.” Anti shrugged it off. A slight argument broke out over the statement. People were shouting and yelling and pulling hair. The monster was sitting back, watching it all in annoyance. “ENOUGH!” he shouted, and everyone was frozen in their place. “One of you WILL die, and there is nothing none of you can do about it. You had your warning, and you ignored it. You had another chance, and all you did was screw around. Now, we play by my rules. “You…” he said, glancing at STAREYe. “Come here.” STAREYe suddenly drifted in front of him, still frozen in place. “Do you know what is inside of you?” the monster asked him. “I’ll take your silence as a ‘no.’ If you wouldn’t mind, I’ll inform you. “As legend goes, there was a young boy who lived centuries ago, grown up in the farm lands of Idaho. He grew up as a normal, loving boy. He had a horse, a dog that he played with everyday. He grew up a normal life, being home-schooled by his grandmother and grand-father. “He had normal friends. They were very close, like family; like brethren. They spent more time together then they did alone. “One night, while playing a friendly game of strip poker, the group suffered a terrible thunder storm, with winds and rain that made the cows fly to Ohio. They all crept close together, to keep each other warm during the storm. The storm mortally scared them, causing them distraught and fear. Every strike of lightning was like a strike against the heart, for it weakened them. It weakened their spirit. “Then suddenly, the house started collapsing on itself. Everybody dodged out of the way, except for the boy. A large dressor from the attic and large pieces of the ceiling had fallen on him, pinning him to the ground. The group started running out of the house. “He stopped his friends, and begged them for help, but they refused, for they feared themselves getting pinned. “‘Please, I beg of you. I thought we were friends!’ “They ignored his pleads and evacuated the house. “‘How could you! I thought I could trust you. I would have died for you, and I thought you would have died for me!’ he pouted. He screamed more and more, and finally gave up. ‘Fine. If you refuse to help me, than I shall get revenge upon you, my…friends…in this carnation or the next!’ “That was the last that human ears heard again. Several seconds later, the house completely imploded on itself, with him inside. “The legend says that the carnation of that boy was sealed. Sealed in a cave that no man was ever to open again.” The monster looked over the group, still frozen in their places. “And why, does this effect you?” he asked everyone. “Legend also says that on a night, the carnations of that very same group of friends, would travel to the cave, accompanied by one of the elite ones. I shall not go into what an elite one is right now, for you are not yet ready to understand, and you may never be. But legend says when that event happens, the carnation of the boy would rise again, through the elite one, and wreak havoc on the worlds that betrayed him. “In order to save the World, the elite one must die. And do you happen to know WHO the elite one is?” The monster asked, staring at STAREYe. “Bingo…” He said to nobody. “Now, I ask you, I beg of you, let me smite him in his place, for he shall bring doom to the World if he lives. Anyone who stands in my way shall die.” He spoke out loud. “Well, what am I saying…you’re frozen. Of course you can’t object. Being all-powerful is awesome, don’t you agree?” “You’d have to tell me sometime…” Sommie came charging from behind him, his blade in hand. “HIIIYYAAAAAAAA!” He shouted, jumping on the monster, starting the fight for the #melee gang.
Well, hope you all liked it. I know I left somethings unanswered, but believe me, bye the time the last chapter rolls around, everything will be answered...I hope...
Oh, and it may be getting a new title soon .Why? Because I said so, and I think anything could be better than "The Story". Plus it'll make more sense
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Post by William on Jun 2, 2003 11:52:30 GMT -5
OMG!!! ROFLROFL thats the best chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 2, 2003 15:28:10 GMT -5
Thank you, I guess. ust doing what I like eighth best: writing.
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