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Post by Static2007 on Jun 2, 2003 15:49:28 GMT -5
Nice chapter! I like it! ^_^
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 2, 2003 23:23:35 GMT -5
Sommie leapt up behind the monster, striking up his shade blade in the process. The monster let out a monstrous roar. Sommie leapt up and over the monster, making sure to puncture both of the monster’s eyes with the blade. The monster started trampling over everything, with no consideration of who it might be. Sommie leapt across the forest floor tackling people out of the way. When everyone was safe, and the monster had regained some way to see, they turned around to face each other. Sommie was a 5’9” guy with a piece of sharp metal. The moster was…well…a monster, 15’ tall with natural weapons all over his body and an all-powerful nature to match. “Yeah…definitely should have stayed home on this one…” he thought out loud, before they charged at each-other. Sommie prepped his blade for strike. He swung, it made contact. A large emittion of light broke from the wound, nearly blinding Sommie. He took his blade out and noticed the leg completely snapping off. He quickly jumped to the next leg and did the same before he was knocked against the tree, his weapon skewered across the floor. Sommie slowly climbed up and crawled over to grab it. The monster picked up a tree and threw it at him. Sommie tried to avoid it, but it was too large to avoid. I rolled over his leg with a mind-numbing crunch sound. He screamed. The monster picked up two trees this time, and was planning on squashing Sommie with them. Sommie stopped screaming just enough to notice what was about to happen a half second before it did. He suddenly flew several feet in the airand directly behind the monster. The monster made a well placed kick in his face and he dropped like stones. “Stupid mortal…” The monster said, picking him up around the waist. “You should never challenge someone like me. I never lose.” He said, squeezing his torso, choking him. “Neither…have…I…” Sommie struggled. An explosion suddenly emitted from his hand, and suddenly, there was no longer a hand left. Sommie ran over to his weapon. “SECLUSION!” he yelled and struck it into the ground. The forest suddenly went pitch dark. Not a single light could be seen from anything. “Now…you die…” He said, running at the monster. He hacked an slashed at him in various different places each time. The monster never knew where, and by the time he realized where Sommie was hitting him, he had left for another striking point. Five minutes went by, and Sommie didn’t stop. Finally, the forest returned to light, and he saw the remains of his fight. A bloody carcass was left, ravaged by sword markings on every square inch. Blood was still pumping out, even though the body was in several different pieces. Organs were laying on the forest floor, and blood was trickling into a waterfall down the hill. In the places where the body had been severed, veins and such were still sticking out, connecting each part to the other. Sommie dropped his blade and fell to the ground in disgust, weeping. “Good…fight…human…” The monster muttered. Insomniacdude looked up. “Good...fight…master…of…the…legends…” The monster trailed off. Sommie panted, confused, tears still running down his cheeks. “Master…of the…what?” He asked. He repeated it over and over several times when a hand grabbed his back. “AH!” he screamed. “Hey, hey, hey…it’s just me…Soapy…” “Oh thank god…oh thank you…” “That was…brutal…” Static spoke, in a very soothing voice. “Do you need to talk about it?” NOS said to him from a distance. “I think…” he stammered. “Yeah?” Several people said in unison. “I think my legs are broken from the tree. The adrenaline kept me going the whole time. What do you think?” He held them up and they were bent in ways that contortionists would vomit at. “It’s merely a flesh. Wound. Walk it off.” Anti egged him. Sommie let out a fake laugh. “Well, is everyone else all right?” He asked, checking everyone. “Yeah, thanks man.” UWA patted him on the shoulder. “What about you, Rick. You’ve barely said a word throughout the entire event. Are you all right?” Rick stepped from the trees. He looked out over the massacre that Sommie had made, and down to Sommie. “Whoa…somebody needs a hug…” he muttered. “So, everyone’s cool?” Sommie asked. “Then we’re off, to the POS mansion…or anyplace than here, at that. He started clawing at different pieces of branches and attempted to pull himself along. “All right, all right. We’ll carry you. I mean, you did save our lives and all…” Rick told him. Everyone quickly searched for supplies to make a basic stretcher to carry him on. “Ah yes…why walk when you can create the worst massacre within recent history and break your legs.” STAREYe walked over to him. He looked as if he was about to say something, but couldn’t quite get to it. “You…you did that, to save my life?” He finally stammered out. Sommie thought it over for a few seconds. “No, I just don’t know what would happen if I didn’t have anyone good to play against me in TimeSplitters 2. Yes I did that to save your life. You think I’m a bad friend or something?” “Well, no…it’s just….my old friends would never…” “Old friends?” Sommie asked him. “What I’m trying to say is that it took courage, and I wanna say, you know, thanks, and stuff, I guess. So, yeah.” He nodded his head. “This is really making you uncomfortable, isn’t it?” “Just a little.” He trailed off. “Well, then let’s talk about something else.” “Naw, I think you need some time to think. I can feel it.” He said, walking off to help the others make a stretcher.
I didn't really end this one with a cliffhanger/suspesneful thing. Why? I couldn't think of one, that's why.
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Post by Static2007 on Jun 3, 2003 15:42:15 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Keep going! ^_^
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 3, 2003 17:22:07 GMT -5
When I get home from marching band practice, so expect an update around 8-9ish.
EDIT: Or maybe not....
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 6, 2003 11:19:54 GMT -5
Thought I anounced this here..... Anyway, No update in such a while because of my BO#M project. I MIGHT take time off later to put up a new chapter, but I don't know. If I DO, it'll be about five days for the next one, so I'll have to end it in a horrible cliffhanger.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 6, 2003 11:27:08 GMT -5
Okay, no problem. We'll keep enjoying this cliffhanger then.
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Post by insomniacdude on Jun 11, 2003 20:54:42 GMT -5
I got a new update up. Rejoice and stuff, I guess.
Two days later, some of the gang was talking in channel melee. * Static2007 laughs really evil like <SoaponaRope> wtf smurf gimme back my hippo. I need that for the prom tonight <insomniacdude> dude, that bitch is cheating on me. She was MY date <Static2007> X-D *** STAREYe (random stuff goes here. Its not like you pay attention to it anyway) has joined #melee <kingrick> Sup foo <STAREYe> I’m sick <insomniacdude> Yeah, but luckily looks aren’t everything in this world. <STAREYe> No, really. I can barely move. I can’t think straight. I feel…like I’m strapped to a chair and I can’t move <insomniacdude> Ah, yes, my friend is going through the same thing <insomniacdude> It’s called a bandage fetish <STAREYe> Harder to think feel like I dieing whats going on <SoaponaRope> You ok? <Static2007> Are you ok? *** Steve (more random crap. Seriously, why is this here?) has joined #melee <Steve> Sup Soapy, Anti, Sommie, Static, STAREYe, Metroid, Steve <STAREYe> help me please co *** Signoff: STAREYe ( ) <Anti_Hero> wtf was that all about <Static2007> he better be messing around with us <insomniacdude> I don’t think he is <Steve> ?? <Static2007> Oh, yeah. I doubt it though. Why now? <Steve> Did I miss something here? <insomniacdude> you had to have been there. We’ll explain later. There’s no time. We gotta make sure… <Static2007> Yeah, see you in a few minutes. Signoff: Static2007 ( )
Static ran out of channel melee and quickly hurried to STAREYe’s place. It wasn’t far from #melee. It was just near the POS castle, so likely Soapy would get there first. She neared the castle and gasped. “Oh…my god…” The castle had disappeared. A large, smoldering crater was in its place. Not a living thing was left. The air itself seemed to be dead and thick. “Horrible, isn’t it?” A voice said behind her. She was about to turn around, but she was held in place. “Don’t move, or you die. Don’t talk, or you die. Don’t think about doing anything, or you die. Understand?” Static paused for a moment. “Who are you?” “What did I say about talking?” “Right, none. So, what should I do, oh mighty master of the universe who thinks he can control me.” She said sarcastically, back flipping several feet into a tree. “ARGH!” The unknown person yelled. Static grabbed onto a branch, swung around it, and flew back down, pinning the guy to the ground. “I would have expected you to be a challenge.” She said to him. “Arrogance is a no-no.” “So is letting down your guard.” His fist flew up and landed squarely on her jaw. She flew back, flipped back, and landed on her feet, electricity already building up. The man rolled to his back, and kicked himself up. Static was finally able to get a good look at him. “STAREYe?” She asked, confused. “No. Not anymore. Sit down, please.” A log rolled down and forced her down. Vines appeared from nowhere and tied her hands to her chest. “How’d you do that?” “My element is forest.” He mumbled, sitting down next to her. “Now, I know what you are about to ask, and I hope you know that it is the most irrelevant.” “Where’s Soapy?” “Soapy is dead. I killed him myself.” Static paused for several moments to let that sink in. “Why did you kill him?” “This you should already know. Several days ago, this body traveled to the cave for which my soul had been caged in. This body was also of the elite ones. I thought the master of legends would have told you?” “That…monster? Was he the master of legends?” “Yes, yes. Though, not anymore. Of course, after that boy killed him. What did you call him? Sommie?” Static nodded her head. “Hm…Yes, Sommie put up a valiant fight, and defeated the only undefeated of the gods, the master of legends. Well, now his body is returned to normal, and that boy is master of the legends.” “Pardon?” “Oh, you don’t know? Any entity that defeats a god is entitled with their power. I suppose it’s something mortals wouldn’t know.” “What are you saying?” “I’m saying he is now the master of legends. He defeated that god he was fighting. That god was the master of legends. The knowledge and power that comes with it has now passed to him.” “No way. That’s too cliché.” “Ain’t it?” “It sure is.” “Anyway, I’ll start over. My friends left me to die. I swore revenge upon them. Their carnations moved on, until the moment they were reunited. That night, they were reunited.” “Who are they?” “I do not know their names. It was three males, and one female. I tracked down one male and killed him already. Soapy, you called him? You have come to me. Now all that remains are two males, and my soul shall move on and rest in peace.” Static thought for a moment. “Wait, wait…Soapy didn’t go into the cave. He couldn’t have been a carnation.” He was about to say something, but he stopped. “That’s impossible. I saw him die. I watched him myself.” He said, trailing off. “Oh yeah? Watch this.” Soapy punched him in the gut and stabbed him in the arm. He quickly stood up, and ran off into the distance, soon disappearing into nowhere. “Get me outta here, will you?” Static squirmed. Soapy walked over and tried to untie the vines holding her in place, but couldn’t. “Use the knife.” Soapy tried to cut through the vines, but still no budge in the knot. “Times like this I wish I would’ve gone to scouts.” Soapy mumbled. He worked at it for a few minutes, and finally gave up. “It’s won’t budge.” He said, gasping. “You’re stuck to that log, and the log is stuck to the ground.” Static let that sit for a moment. “He’s going to be back. And he won’t be alone. Yu have to get out of here and tell the others about what he said. You got that. Tell the others who went into that cave. NOS, Rick, UWA, they are in danger. They could die at any minute.” “But…” “Go. Tell them everything he said to me. Their lives are in danger. I will not let them die because I was selfish.” Soapy started to walk off and turn around. “Goodbye, Static.” “Goodbye Soapy.” Soapy ran off through the woods around what used to be his castle. He ran nonstop, for ten minutes. He stopped to regain his strength. He crouched down, his hands on his knees, and started to cry. In the distance, he heard a scream, then silence.
Yes, start bitching. But remember, in my story, everything happens for a reason. Nothing is as it seems. Insert other mysterious crap here.
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Post by Static2007 on Jun 11, 2003 21:06:42 GMT -5
Good chapter! Keep going!
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